Saturday

Inspiration


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Words not said
No need
She felt his happiness
he sensed her pain

Just a glance
No more
She saw his anguish
he witnessed her joy

Two minds joined
As one
He was her soul mate
she his inspiration




23 comments:

Mary333 said...

This is beautiful and striking. I read a lot of the poems from the prompt. Many came at it from a very pessimistic angle. You said a lot in few words. I really enjoyed it. I guess b thought mine was unrealistic, the funny thing is...it was true. I write my poetry from real life:)

Jeques said...

A perfect match

A meant to be

Perfect pair

Like spoon and fork,

Scissors,

Pants

Slippers

One is useless without the other -

Two hearts become one.

To find that one person to make you whole, is heaven on earth.

I wish you well.

~ Jeques

Chris Tea said...

Its beautiful.

Missy said...

Keith I haven't been by this blog in sometime and boy I've missed out on a lot.

This is awesomely sensual and soothing. Is it about our friends or perhaps you?????

Great stuff here.

Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!

Jyotika said...

lovely.....each word holds deep meaning..both individually n wen read together....too little to read n too much to understnd....loved it...

Short Poems said...

Nice stuff here Keith,Great little poem :)

Marinela

Poet in flames said...

Simple yet profound. Lovely. How have u been?Plz drop by my blog again. Miss ur cmnts.

www.deepteshpoetry.blogspot.com

Deborah said...

Beautiful...

Jingle Poetry said...

fabulously put.

soul mate, inspirations, they are one, divine!

Dave King said...

A very fine web site indeed. I am much impressed.

indiwriter said...

Lovely..yin and yang. And a very beautiful header photo.

You might like to read this one of mine on the same theme:
Tango

cheers!

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

So very beautiful Keith. God bless.

alka narula said...

very beautiful

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Mary said...

Sounds like a great relationship. All should be so fortunate!

She Writes Here Now said...

MmmmHmmm :). Beauty of people in love.

hopefuljo said...

This is beautiful. Not a word wasted. So wonderfully done.

mindlovemisery said...

Magnificent =)

T. Powell Coltrin said...

One word: beautiful!

Keith Hillman said...

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Rosey Pinkerton said...

My Whirl is called Shhh...!

C Knotts said...

Simple yet beautiful.